Tutor feedback- change of direction

09/10/15
$%&@#
Prototype, Empathy, Define, Ideate,

After showing Nanns what I had so far and the difficulty I had explaining my direction it is clear I need to define my idea and create more hierarchy in both the presentation and the dossier.

I need to focus on my delivery in terms of structure and supporting evidence. This means bullet pointing what i need to say (clear heirarchy) and explaining it some some kind of journey map.

I need to start out with the
context- Audience, issue
Big idea- how to address the problem
explanation
-Touchpoints
-Journey maps